Mindmap Chapter 16

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Translation of a part of chapter 16

War es das Gefahrenkomitee oder das Brandstifterkomitee. Das riesige Gesicht war wahrscheinlich ihre Hausaufgabe von letzter Woche. Tyler würde es wissen, aber die erste Regel von Projekt Chaos ist, dass du keine Fragen über Projekt Chaos stellst. Im Komitee für Überfälle des Projekts Chaos, sagt Tyler, hatte er diese Woche mit allen besprochen, was nötig ist um eine Pistole abzufeueren. Alles, was eine Pistole tut, ist eine Explosion in eine bestimmte Richtung zu lenken. Beim letzten Treffen des Überfallkomitees brachte Tyler eine Pistole und die gelben Seiten mit. Sie trafen sich im Keller, in dem sich der Fight Club am Samstag trifft. Jedes Komitee trifft sich an einem anderem Abend:
Brandstiftung trifft sich am Montag.
Überfälle am Dienstag.
Gefahr trifft sich am Mittwoch.
Und Desinformation am Donnerstag.
Organisiertes Chaos. Die Bürokratie der Anarchie. Du weisst schon. Selbsthilfegruppen. In etwa.

Translation of a part of chapter 16

War es das Gefahrenkomitee oder das Brandstifterkomitee. Das riesige Gesicht war wahrscheinlich ihre Hausaufgabe von letzter Woche. Tyler würde es wissen, aber die erste Regel von Projekt Chaos ist, dass du keine Fragen über Projekt Chaos stellst. Im Komitee für Überfälle des Projekts Chaos, sagt Tyler, hatte er diese Woche mit allen besprochen, was nötig ist um eine Pistole abzufeueren. Alles, was eine Pistole tut, ist eine Explosion in eine bestimmte Richtung zu lenken. Beim letzten Treffen des Überfallkomitees brachte Tyler eine Pistole und die gelben Seiten mit. Sie trafen sich im Keller, in dem sich der Fight Club am Samstag trifft. Jedes Komitee trifft sich an einem anderem Abend:
Brandstiftung trifft sich am Montag.
Überfälle am Dienstag.
Gefahr trifft sich am Mittwoch.
Und Desinformation am Donnerstag.
Organisiertes Chaos. Die Bürokratie der Anarchie. Du weisst schon. Selbsthilfegruppen. In etwa.

Screenplay Chapter 12 p.96-99

1.Characters

Name: Narrator
Age: Unknown
Personality: has insomnia, has out of body experiences, irritating
Home: Paper Street 2, degenerated house
Friends/Relations: best friend is Tyler, friendship to Marla

Name: Narrators Boss
Age: Unknown
Personality: strict, nerved
Home: Unknown
Friends/Relations: Boss of the Narrator

-> The Boss of the Narrator has found a sheet of paper with the rules of Fight Club in the copier. He asks him if he forgot the sheet.
-> The Narrator have to stand to the first and the second rule of Fight Club. He have to be silent about Fight Club. Because of this, he`s trying to tell his Boss the lie, that he know nothing about Fight Club.
-> He`s trying to be cool and suggesting his Boss, that he don`t know, what Fight Club is.

2. Story

The Narrator is sitting at his desk in his office. His Boss comes into his room with a sheet of paper which was left in the copy machine in his hand. On the papersheet are the 10 rules of Fight Club.

Boss
(Over-the-shoulder shot at Narrator`s Boss)
“The first rule of fight club is you don`t talk about fight club.”
(gigglingly)
“The second rule of fight club is you don`t talk about fight club…
I hope, this isn`t yours.”

(cross cut between the Narrator and his Boss)

(close up to the narrator)

(Narrator is looking bored)

(close up to the Boss)
“The third rule of fight club is two men per fight.
One fight at a time.”
(freaks out)
“What the fuck is this!?
What about it?”
(he shakes the sheet of paper under the Narrators nose)
“Is this some little game You`re playing on company time?
You`re paid for your full attention, not to waste time with your little stupid war games!
And You`re not paid to abuse the copy machines!
What do you think, should I do with an employee who spends company time in some
little fantasy world? If You were in my shoes, what would you do!?”

Narrator

(medium shot at the Narrator and the Boss)

(Narrator is thinking about something)

“What I would do… is… I`d be very careful who I talked to about this paper.
It sounds like some dangerous psychotic killer wrot this, and this buttoned-down
shizophrenic could probably go over the edge at any moment in the working day
and stalk from office to office with an Armalite AR-180 cabine gas-operated semiautomatic.”

(close up to the Boss, he looks confused)

(medium shot at Narrator and Boss)

“The guy is probably at home every night with a little rattail file, filling a cross into
the tip of every one of this rounds. This way, when he shows up to work one morning and pumps a round into his nagging, ineffectual, petty, whining, butt-sucking, candy-ass boss, that one round will split along the filed grooves and spread open the way a dumdum bulet flowers inside you to blow a bushel load of your stinking guts out through your spine. Picture your gut chakra opening in a slow-motion explosion of sausage-casing small intestine.”

(Boss takes the paperout from under Narrators nose)

(Over-the-shoulder shot on the Narrator)

“It`s scary. This is probably somebody, who works here for years. Probably this guy knows everything of you, where you live and where your wife works and your kids go to school.”

(medium shot)

(seconds of silence)

“No, the paper is not mine…
Maybe you shouldn`t be bringing me every little piece of trash you pick up…”

(Close up at the appaled Boss)

Boss
“O-… Okay. Thank you for your time…”

(medium shot)

(The Boss runs out of Narrators office)

CUT

Bitchy Big Bob`s view

When his head was between my bitch tits, I saw up and there was a new face in the group. It was a women named Marla – Marla Singer. Instantly I wanted her to cry between my tits too. My partner looked up to her too. He looked frightened. What`s going on in his head?

Sebastian Seidler&Sebastian Hoppe

Chapter 1-5

There were some very interesting parts in the first 5 chapters, but now there are some questions remaining:

(1) Why can the first person narrator sleep better after he whined?
(2) Does he have an aviophobia or why is he losing his insomnia in the moment when the plane lands?

It’s a bit confusing that the direct speech of the narrator is not quoted (all the time).
–> (3) Why does the author use direct speech on page 23?
(4) Was Chloe important / Will she be important? We have this question because she was not just mentioned, she was described and died 2 days later (Her sister said that).